I really really dislike cats because of just the way they look I´m not judging a book by its cover I just don´t like cats over all I don´t like the way they stare at me it makes me a bit creeped out and like I said before just the way they look gives me a creepy vibe, like there whiskers it looks like it could just go right through someones body. But other than all of that I think cats are alright for a pet.
Monday, November 5, 2018
Are dogs better than cats?
Cats and dogs are basically the same they both have fur, tails and the most obvious one eyes. But I think my self that dogs are more superior than cats. I don´t know why but I have just always disliked cats and liked dogs more, even though I´m quite afraid of dos I just really like them. I like dogs because you can take them for a walk/run you can also play fetch with them both of does ideas really make me want to buy a dog because I really like doing physical things that are out doors.
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Hey TJ , I can see clearly what side your on . I like how you have explained why you like dogs . In my opinion dogs are better than cats and you can check out my blog to see why I think that dogs are better. Then cats . A helpful would be to fix up some spelling mistakes and also don't start a line with but because it draws away the attention because its boring , A thoughtful would be to Explain in more detail about why you like dogs and cats and maybe explain a terrifying time you have had with a cat . Anyways good job
ReplyDeleteMy blog is http://shsmichaelh.blogspot.com/ go check it out to get a understanding to see what I like better !
DeleteMichael, WOW! I am so impressed with the time and effort you spent offering TJ some helpful feedback. You gave him some great suggestions and it is clear that you engaged with his work. This is an excellent example of what a great way blogs can help share learning.
DeleteI think it was also a great idea to add your blog link so that TJ or others can read your post.
Ka mau te wehi!
- Miss Birtch
Hello TJ!
ReplyDeleteIt is clear that you prefer dogs over cats, and you used your personal voice through your writing to express some of your ideas around why.
For this to be a more effective piece of writing, I want you to focus on clear evidence and adding in some formal language or word choices.
- Miss Birtch