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Friday, October 26, 2018

The Three Little Bears

Welcome to the wonderful land of the three little bears and their mother who never wanted the three little bears to leave but they choose to and she didn't like it so she tried to do something really bad that cold hurt the three bears.

In the part New Zealand called Christchurch and also next to the woods and on a very rainy day.

The three little bears names was Sameer, Michael, Eddy and the aliens name was Ruby. Sameer lived in house made of glass, Michael lived in a house made out of stone and lastly Eddy made his house made out of metal.

Then the three little bears heard a loud screaming in the woods, it sounded a bit like a little girls scream.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora TJ!

    It's great to see you posting on your blog again. I really like what you have written for your fairy tale and I can't wait to see what happens next.

    My favourite part was that you are using your friends from class, so I am able to picture your characters easily!

    Good job!
    - Miss Birtch

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