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Friday, June 23, 2017

Persuasive writing banned or not

Dear Mr Sutton

Introduction: In my opinion I think scooter should be banned because the injuries to the rider and others, potential damage to school buildings and surfaces and especially the risks of thefts you wouldn’t want someone stealing your scooter I know I wouldn't.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       

I think scooters should be banned because of the risk of injuries to the rider and others. If the rider fell off they could hurt themselves, or if they accidentally drove into someone else they would hurt them too. I think scooters should be banned at school because people can be badly injured.

I think potential damage to the school buildings and surfaces with scooters cost too much so I would prefer no scooters at school, like if someone is going too fast on their scooter and they can’t stop they could crash into a window or someone's car then you would have to pay for it. I also think that scooters should be banned because it could damage other people's property.

There are theft’s out there so watch out for your scooter. Theft can be quite tricky to chase down if they steal your bike or scooter they're gonna get away so I would ring the police and let them handle it so that’s why I don’t bring my scooter to school. Let's say like if you bought a new scooter that cost like about $169 and a theft comes and steals it you won't be happy about that.   


This could help our school and other people's property.That's why I think scooters should be banned from Hornby High School