If you don’t know how the water cycle works well here it is. The water cycle is how water goes from the ground to the sky and back again. This makes it a cycle.
First it’s Evaporation. Evaporation is when the sun shines at the sea or rivers or any kind of water source. The sun turns it into steam which flows up to the sky and that’s how the clouds are made. the hotter it is the more steam goes up.
Next is Condensation, Condensation is when the steam up in the sky called clouds. That’s why we have clouds.
Lastly is Precipitation. This is when the steam in the sky turns back into water and then it comes raining down on the earth and into the seas or rivers and it restarts its cycle all over again.
And that's how the water cycle works around the world The water cycle is important for us to survive.
Something that I did well: Puntuction
Something I can improve for next time: Adding more Infomation
Something that I need more help with: My spelling
Talofa TJ! I am so impressed with the work you posted today. I can see that you made changes to your work when you edited with Mrs Cotter and this piece has improved from your first draft.
ReplyDeleteI agree that you were very mindful to your punctuation and your sentences are correct. For your next goal, what are some ways that you can work on your spelling for the next piece?
Great work TJ!
- Miss Birtch