This is my mindmup that's about a space chimp. The space chimp was stuck in space for 65 years and then he finely made it back to earth.
Friday, July 29, 2016
Space chimp
This is my mindmup that's about a space chimp. The space chimp was stuck in space for 65 years and then he finely made it back to earth.
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Nice TJ I can see a good action packed story coming. Mybe you could add more to the solution (how the problem was solved) instead of just (he got back to earth)
ReplyDeleteNice TJ I can see a good action packed story coming. Mybe you could add more to the solution (how the problem was solved) instead of just (he got back to earth)
ReplyDeleteDelightful work TJ. You can make a great story from some planning like this. I like the way there's some humorous moments, like the city is crushed by the pokemon go apocalypse. The only thing is you mention the chimp once and in the events you say he. Other then that its good.
ReplyDeleteWow TJ i like your mind mup but i think that you need to pup more but it looks so so cool And can you all so comment on my blog as will cool thank you tj
ReplyDeleteNice job TJ. I like how you wrote an intro on the bottom of your mindmup. I think you should check your spelling before you post something.
ReplyDeleteGreat work TJ, Looks like you've been working hard. Nice planning it has loads of information.
ReplyDelete1 of them facts are funny it is up the top can you find it Tj.by abbagale
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