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Wednesday, November 14, 2018

Narrative writing fairy tales

Welcome to the wonderful land of the three little bears and their mother who never wanted the three little bears to leave but they choose to and she didn't like it so she tried to do something really bad that cold hurt the three bears.

In the part New Zealand called Christchurch and also next to the woods and on a very rainy day.

The three little bears names was  Sameer, Michael, Eddy and the aliens name was Ruby. Sameer lived in house made of glass, Michael lived in a house made out of stone and lastly Eddy made his house made out of metal.


Then the three little bears heard a loud screaming in the woods, it sounded a bit like a little girls scream, they all go outside to have a look and they hear a even louder sound it was so loud even the village heard it.

It was a different type of sound they didn't know what it was no one did it was a sound never heard before but until today. After the three little bears heard the sound they all gathered  together and ran into the woods like amateurs. When they ran into the direction of the scream, they saw something but it was from the back, it turned its body and before the three bears could say anything they just fell to the ground and from there on the three little bears were never to be seen again.


When the three little bears woke up they were all tied up but they were also in this very very dark room altogether. All of the three little bears screamed as loud as they could but still no sign of anyone they screamed again and again and again but still no one. After all that screaming they heard a little voice but they thought is was just the wind blowing until they heard it again and again but this time it was more people, the three little bears started screaming with them they started talking to each other but then there was a dead silence.


The three little bears were trying to listen closely until the heard a loud bang and then they flew across the room like planes and knocked themselves out. There was these weird looking things that picked them up and carried them to another place. When the three little bears woke up they all screamed at the same time because they woke up back at home not there own home but there moms home they were all wondering why would someone/thing bring them here but then there answer just unfolded at the moment when a alien walked in the room an revealed themselves. 
 

As the Aiken walked in the three little bears grabbed whatever was next to them and started running at the door like animals, who ever was going to come through that door they were definitely going to get a concussion, when the three little bears saw who was coming through the door they all stopped and stared at it for a split second and then they all said “Mum” at the same time. When they saw their Mum they all hugged her and asked if she was ok and if the someone/thing hurt her and she said it was her who caused all of it the scream in the woods the concussion everything was all her but she said it was for a good reason she just didn't want the the three little bears to move out where the danger is she just wanted to love them forever, so they all just had a laugh and lived happily ever after.

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