Monday, May 2, 2016
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Nice work TJ I love it.
ReplyDeleteGreat job TJ I like it because you described what it would be like to be in the war
ReplyDeleteNice work TJ it is Funny! :>)
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DeleteWoW that is some cool wrok I really like it.
ReplyDeleteWow TJ this is a cool blog keep it up.
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DeleteWow i like this work keep it up this is outstanding......
ReplyDeletehi TJ my name is tama from st Bernadette. I like how you made the message
ReplyDeleteyour made up story to you parents. but next time you can put the words next to the army
Hi my name is Jackson I am a year 5 at Templeton Primary School. I really liked how did lots of information on the slide, it made me think of when we had to make a information slide. Next step it is a bit hard to read the writing on slide 2 have you thought about changing it. But over all it is a great slide.
ReplyDeleteHi I am James I really like your sad story about WW1 it is really interesting. I also like how you described what it looks like in the story with the flys and the dead bodies. Next step is to mabey add some more description.
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